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Please READ!!! essay need to be proofread (transfer essay)?
(native country and universities names have been changed)
topic: Please provide a statement (250 words) that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve.
(I am applying to 3 universities)
As the founding fathers declared 234 years ago, the United States of America is a place where “we hold [the] truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable rights, that among these are life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness”. When my folks and I moved from congo to the U.S, three years ago, the first thing that stroked us was the seemingly infinite amount of prospects that this country presented before our eyes. Coming from an underprivileged background with a penniless single mom, I realized how fortunate I was to be young, and full of life on this land of opportunities. I felt as if I was holding in my hands the recipe to make my dreams come true, and assist my family. I sensed so much power, and freedom to strive for life. My success was almost palpable, even the sky was not matching the limit of my potential. My fear for the language, which I thought was going to be the biggest obstacle of all, gradually vanished as my eager to succeed exponentially amplified. Even though I was only a French speaker with no knowledge of any American culture, becoming as successful as Edward Lewis was not just an “American dream” anymore. By living on the U.S territories, it became my “American dream”, too: an objective to achieve.
Although Pretty Woman was and still is by far one of my favorite movies all time, I stopped fantasizing with the Richard Gere’s character and started focusing on how to turn out to be like that character: a tidy and successful investment banker. After series of hasty fascinating searches through the web and my entourage, the conclusion and fact was that: If I were to be an investment banker, I was to master in the field of business, economics, and management. Another investigation I did right away reveal that: the best investment bankers come from the best schools of business; schools like yours. At the time of my findings, which was last year, I was a high school sophomore at a school in the Brooklyn that was not meeting my challenges. I knew that in order to reach the level I desired, I was to look for challenges and face them. This quest of challenges created in me the zeal of learning new things. As an increasing continuum, the ardent appreciation for my education grew beyond any proportion. And that same year, I decided to bring an end to my high school career and embarked on my early college journey.
Last August, I attended Boston College. Moving from New York City to Boston was rather a surprising discovery than just a fun college adventure. For the first time, I became conscious that the road that leads to my goal was going to get coarser as I get closer to my destination. I was surrounded by many people like me, and others that made me question my own intellect. Even if there were only about 184 of us, it was the more compact and intelligent grouping that had ever been exposed to me. In such little amount of time, I made a lot of reliable friends who were also highly determined to accomplish their dreams. We kept our eyes on the price. However, reviewing our notes and books was not all we did in our school, we also knew how to take sporadic breaks to party, play football, or enjoy the magnificent 3-D graphic of Modern Warfare 2 on Xbox360. I enjoyed being at Boston college until this semester when I found out about the limits of the college in the field of business and economics.
Although Boston College is a highly competitive liberal art college, besides microeconomics and macroeconomics, it does not offer any other class in my field of interest. If I stay here, this academic shortage will compromise my dream, thus the transfer to your school is like the rescue of my happiness and I am willing to do whatever it will take to attain it. By transferring to your school, I get the opportunity to reside in a similarly bright entourage, study in the field I am interested in, and continue my studies at a highly competitive institute. I would like to able to read for hours or do fifty pushups without being called a “geek” or a “jock”. In brief, I want to be around a group of open minded scholars that will accept me for what I am; a group of scholars that I will synthesize with, liberally express myself, and easily pursuit my happiness. Also, the size of your school is one appealing factor that encourages transferring, the fun I had here can be three or even ten times higher. Your resources and facilities are magnetizing, and your diversity astonishing. I would like to terminate my undergraduate study at your school to preserve a hope of achieving my “American dream”, have a formative experience, and prove to everyone that the founding fathers were right when they made the Declaration o
the end is "declaration of independence of the United states of America"
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how can I create a good essay title? (Read description)?
Im reading a book called the Hero by Ron, Woods. The hero is a good book and here is the back of the book:
Nobody believed that Dennis Leeper was a hero. He was the type of kid you hid from when he pedalled his bike down the road. But Jamie couldn’t say no when his father asked him to include Dennis in the raft project. Someone needed to hold the line when Jamie and his cousin Jerry finally got the raft in the river. But they should have known that Dennis couldn’ t be trusted to hold onto it. Without paddles and out of people’ s sight, the three boys are swept downstream toward the dams, the steep falls, and three separate destinies. One swims to shore. One is rescued. And one never returns alive. Overcome by guilt and the fear that Dennis’ s father will take revenge for his son’s death, Jamie tells everyone how he survived.Dennis was a hero. The question is will anyone believe it?
Jerry falls out and swims to shore getting people to help rescue them. I Wrote an essay on why he was a hero with the three main points: He is brave, He is athletic and he isent selfish. I need a title. Can you help me out? Thanks.
can someone please edit this essay (on a 10th grade level) and tell me what i should change in it?
i’m writing a practice gateway, and i missed the day of peer editing
i cannot make up the final draft that we have to write in class, so i’m really relying on you guys to edit this for me
just tell me what doesn’t fit, or what is written incorrectly, all that good stuff
no one makes good grammar grades in my english teacher’s class and i want to be the first
thank you so much
One of the elements that many novels and movies portray is how there is a character that the other characters establish as the underdog. The character exhibits traits that may come across as peculiarity, loneliness, or maybe just high intelligence. This person is often teased and burdened, which William Golding demonstrates blatantly in his novel, Lord of the Flies. A group of boys are marooned on a desolate island after a plan crash, and the natural tensions of panic and chaos occur amongst themselves. One of the older, smarter boys named Piggy is at the core of being mocked due to his insight of their circumstances and disabilities. However, he realizes he has to use his wits to gain the cooperation of everyone to survive and formulate a rescue plan.
The rest of the young boys deem their situation as an adventure; a notion that is crushed when the mature and intellectual twelve year-old Piggy surfaces. Ralph, the central protagonist, is the first to tease him after Piggy regretfully tries to tell the uninterested boy his name: “They used to call me ‘Piggy’.”(Golding 5). Ralph simply responds to this by shrieking with laughter shouting “Piggy! Piggy!” (Golding 5). Ralph’s teasing of Piggy fades away towards the end of the novel; the other boys, especially the obsessive choir headmaster Jack, bombard him all throughout the book until his demise. People come up with myriads of nicknames for that one person who is different than what is considered normal. In these boys’ cases, however, Piggy’s difference—his maturity and intellect—is what the boys indirectly depend on in the beginning for their survival.
Golding’s description of Piggy in the beginning of the novel states: “he was shorter than the fair boy and very fat…looked up through thick spectacles” (Document A). Before Piggy met Ralph, he is aware of the situation and plans to “learn all the survivors’ names so that they can establish a form of order and be rescued” (Golding 5). Piggy’s aptitude as well as his cleverness is also shown when he is called to a physical task, to which he claims he cannot do due to his Asthma. This is best shown when he is disinclined to swim:
“I can’t swim. I wasn’t allowed. My asthma—-“(Golding 7)
Ralph deduces his lie, but from then on, Piggy is left out of most of the physical activities the boys do, “on account of my asthma” (Golding 3)
Piggy’s body and status are different from that of the other boys on the island, but so are his thoughts and approach of their situation. His initial thought is for he and the boys to be rescued off of the island, to which the boys do not support. They either follow the idea of Ralph and being free, or that of Jack and his choir boys, which hunt pigs for food. Piggy realizes and mentions the pilots are “all dead,” and that they are on an island: “Nobody don’t know we’re here. Your dad don’t know, nobody don’t know—“(Golding 8). The boys become ever more reluctant to the idea of rescue, because Piggy says “we may stay here till we die” (Golding 8). Jack, instead, reassures the boys by verbally abusing Piggy to make him look foolish and irrational. Piggy is then treated unfairly at a gathering Jack arranges, where he serves all the boys a piece of their hunted pig save for. Towards the end of the novel, Jack and his hunters become fanatical over killing pigs, which leaves one of the boys murdered. Piggy tries to cover up for the way the boys acted, insisting to Ralph that “it was an accident…he asked for it” (Golding 140). Piggy’s fears of obsession consuming the boys come true, and he and Ralph go to Jack and his hunters to try to get their heads focused back on being rescued and maintaining order. Unfortunately, Jack and his hunters roll a boulder on Piggy, killing him and all sense of civilization and order on the island.
Given that Piggy saw their situation different than the others, and because he looked and acted other than how the other boys did, they remained prejudice towards him and cast him and his ideas away from what they believed. Piggy wanted to be rescued, which unfortunately didn’t happen until he was killed. The prejudice and ‘beast’ within everyone is how situations like this end up with others being hurt. It is fairly straightforward to panic and take the effortless way out of unfamiliar situations; However, if people were to work together and keep conditions stable, anything as miraculous as being rescued off a desert island can be accomplished.
It’s not ment to be in any specific format, but i have to include at least 2 quotes in each paragraph and it has to
if you give me some smartass answer i will report you
who do you think you are to degrade others like that? you think you’re better? then show me by ‘teaching me’ if you don’t want to then don’t waste your time typing to this question. at least give someone that much respect